I’m happy to see that the major upheaval of the memoir I did from the last draft is really working for people. I felt a lack of depth and personal touch to past drafts and being able to add a whole new dimension to this final draft made me really find the memoir I wanted to tell. Emma brings up a good point about adding more wisdom gained at the end. I think I got wrapped up connecting NYFF and Crohn’s that there can be even more to add about the experience with the power of time and reflection.